如何增强英语写作中语句的表现力
　　一、避免使用语意弱的
be动词。　　1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
　　Weak:
Thetrees
arebare.
Thegrass
isbrown.
Thelandscape
seems
drab.
　　Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape.
　　Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for
spring green.
　　2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
　　1) Weak: The team members are good players.
　　Revision: The team members play well.
　　2) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.
　　Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness.
　　3、在以here
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