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是个很好的参考。不过写的时候还是要有自己特色的东西。

减肥兄挺赞的

赞一个。话说我们写PS的时候被要求要强调为何学校的资源，哪方面的资源更适合我们的研究等等

多数写来都大同小异
不过写啥都好，就是别夸大不实

personal statement很重要的一点是表现个人特质

Thanks for sharing your thoughts

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这个先mark上，回头要用。

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I found these website which have good suggestions for your personal statement, it is personal statement because it is true to yourself not other top students. Keep in mind that it is one of the most important piece of evidence that you could distinguish yourself from others, other application material such as transcript, application forms and recommendation letters could be more or less the same. Another personal experience of mine is that you will benefit dramatically to write yourself a good personal statement, it is just like you look into the mirror and tries to describe yourself to someone blind, also you will practice both your writing skills and be familiar with your accomplishment and future goal so that you could well prepared for the future interview for graduate school. (sometimes, good graduate schools interview you for admission or scholarship.)

https://www.petersons.com/graduate-schools/write-graduate-school-essay.aspx#/sweeps-modal

http://college.usatoday.com/2012/10/12/10-tips-for-writing-a-grad-school-personal-statement/

https://mygraduateschool.wordpress.com/2012/03/01/the-personal-statement-for-graduate-school-applications-part-1-of-5/

If it is not displayed properly, please let me know I could paste the original article. Hopefully, it helps.

Recently I have to write a PS for applying the UIUC summer program and suddenly I read your advice. For me, what you said just like a compass, telling me the right way to express myself, thank you very much!

And thanks for sharing too! wish you have a good day!

Good luck with your application, one trick to write a good piece of PS from my experience is also that once you finished your draft, keep it for a few days and then look it again. You will be surprised to see how many changes you will make to your draft, after several iterations, your PS will be yours, personalized.

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支持啊~但是不同专业要求也不一样

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