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A number of conclusions based on research into the effects of violence in computer games seem to be flawed.1. Walker's findings(,p.116) show that “young people who regularly play violent computer games have a tendency to be more aggressive than those who do not”. If this research compares children who have been equally exposed to violence in other media, 2. Smith's () arguments about violence in the media are nor relevant. 3. In addition, Wa ...