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Doing pare-time jobs when you are in school, has many advantages, for example, first of all, you can learn a lot of knowledge, and these knowledges is out of book, Second, the pare-time job would supply you with adequate money. Also, It is a very good opportunity to practices yourself, and to apply what you have learned in school for real work , At last, If you doing part-time jobs when you are in school, your life will be useful.

  However, doing  part-time jobs has some disadvantages, After all, students’ duties is how to make their study well, but if you doing a part-time job, These will take up your time, more or less, there will effect your study. As a  result , you will lose some basic knowledges..

Since part-time jobs have advantages and disadvantages , you have to strike a balance between jobs and study .In collage, we should take more time to study knowledges in books .when you dong part-time jobs, you must promise that your study will keep up with other students.