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DEAR A
ABC COMPANY China have good factory in China, today we get some info:
TT001 was first used by France Plant, But ABC COMPANY still need confirmation with ABC COMPANY Europe for TT002. Maybe reach us on Wednesday morning.
According with our experience, ABC COMPANY is famous for powder coating which is mainly used in aluminum profiles.
You also know ACP panel is liquid coating.
We guess your customer want to match the ACP color with aluminum doors& windows in the wall.
Anyway, we think ABC COMPANY color is no problem for us, we can match it for our A2 ALUBOND, so please do not worry about the color.
If possible, you can send us the color sample of TT002 and TT001 , so we can match it at once. It will be more safe to avoild any mistake.
Best regards
Dear Mr A:
Nice day!
We have tried to contact with ABC COMPANY Asia-Pacific this morning.
We were told that code TT001 was first used by France Plant, But ABC COMPANY still need confirmation with ABC COMPANY Europe for TT002. Considering jat leg, feedback may
reach us on Wednesday morning China Time within the shortest time.
According with our experience, powder coating is mainly used in architectural profiles but liquid coating is for ACP and aluminum coil more. We guess your customer pursue a conformity with color between facade cladding and aluminum doors& windows in the wall.
You can also deliver us the samples by DHL, we will modulate same color in three days.
If color confirmed, we will order raw materials and arrange production simultaneously. And manufacturing process will be limited in a quite short time.
Best regards