Global financial crisis have an remarkable impact on many enterprises and various industries. On the background of financial crisis, China's online game industry is worthy of attention and study. This paper discusses the developement perspectives of China's online game industry based on the performance and industry characteristics   of this  industry in recent years. Moreover some corresponding development measures and strategies are put forward in this study

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Global financial crisis have an  effect on a variety of industries and businesses. In this context, China's online game industry  is more worthy of attention and study. According to the game industry's performance and characteristics of the Chinese game industry ,the paper in this school year  analyzes   the development prospects of the Chinese game industry, and the corresponding development strategies.

{:3_43:}好难啊

这还叫最佳翻译？第一句就犯错了......
Global financial crisis have an remarkable impact on many enterprises and various industries.
错了两处，应为：
Global financial crisis has a remarkable impact on many enterprises and various industries.
后面的错误也很多，而且汉语式英语严重，咳.....